Comments on: The Insect Queen (Part 1) http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/ "We're all naked underneath" Tue, 07 Feb 2012 21:33:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: K8 http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1148 K8 Sun, 14 Oct 2007 19:56:15 +0000 http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1148 Robert and Brian, hope youz two aren't stinging too much from Daz' slaps there, mateys!!! heh heh Doc, cheers for that head's up! I've never heard of that happening before, seriously sounds gruesome! This wasp thing did actually happen to me when I was up the duff. I was in the woods with TAT and two friends going for a Sunday walk and picked up a rotted bark which must have been home to a bunch of wasps because the bastards stung me 7 times, pretty much as it happens in the story here. The only difference was that I was screaming for the lads to help me but they kept yelling 'JUMP IN THE POND' and trying hard not to giggle at me. It was pretty funny in hindsight, but if this was a Marvel comic, Puppychild would be a waspish superhero by now. Maybe she still may be to come, who knows... All I know is that I didn't retch, I just bitched all the way home. Robert and Brian, hope youz two aren’t stinging too much from Daz’ slaps there, mateys!!! heh heh

Doc, cheers for that head’s up! I’ve never heard of that happening before, seriously sounds gruesome!
This wasp thing did actually happen to me when I was up the duff. I was in the woods with TAT and two friends going for a Sunday walk and picked up a rotted bark which must have been home to a bunch of wasps because the bastards stung me 7 times, pretty much as it happens in the story here.

The only difference was that I was screaming for the lads to help me but they kept yelling ‘JUMP IN THE POND’ and trying hard not to giggle at me. It was pretty funny in hindsight, but if this was a Marvel comic, Puppychild would be a waspish superhero by now. Maybe she still may be to come, who knows…

All I know is that I didn’t retch, I just bitched all the way home.

]]> By: Daz http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1147 Daz Sat, 13 Oct 2007 22:02:02 +0000 http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1147 Grwo up, what are you two, boys or men? Grwo up, what are you two, boys or men?

]]> By: Brianf http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1146 Brianf Sat, 13 Oct 2007 02:59:17 +0000 http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1146 FUCK! No part two please. This is going to give me fuckin' nightmares.....and that's not an easy thing to do. Well, FUCK! Who are you? Some fuckin' Oirish Stephen fuckin' King-Girl? Fuuuuuck! ! ! FUCK!
No part two please. This is going to give me fuckin’ nightmares…..and that’s not an easy thing to do.
Well, FUCK!

Who are you? Some fuckin’ Oirish Stephen fuckin’ King-Girl?
Fuuuuuck!
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]]> By: Doc http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1145 Doc Sat, 13 Oct 2007 02:52:20 +0000 http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1145 RE: The Insect Queen (part I) K8, I presume, but...a lovely conceit, well penned. However, for future consideration? Adrenaline is, indeed, a useful thing. However, in a true “fight or flightâ€? scenario, the toll is onerous – most often the individual will retch uncontrollably after the danger has passed. I speak from experience here, as well as what I was taught and have seen. Thus, your heroine would have spent a period of time prone on the ground, ridding her system of the excess adrenaline and... - it would have played nicely, is my guess. Again, I presume. Regards, Doc p.s. I look forward to reading Part 2 p.p.s. I would have sent this Private Post but you don't seem to have an e-mail addy – my bad. RE: The Insect Queen (part I)

K8,

I presume, but…a lovely conceit, well penned.

However, for future consideration?

Adrenaline is, indeed, a useful thing. However, in a true “fight or flightâ€? scenario, the toll is onerous – most often the individual will retch uncontrollably after the danger has passed. I speak from experience here, as well as what I was taught and have seen.

Thus, your heroine would have spent a period of time prone on the ground, ridding her system of the excess adrenaline and… – it would have played nicely, is my guess.

Again, I presume.

Regards,
Doc

p.s. I look forward to reading Part 2

p.p.s. I would have sent this Private Post but you don’t seem to have an e-mail addy – my bad.

]]> By: Robert http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1144 Robert Sat, 13 Oct 2007 00:50:39 +0000 http://www.cackaloo.com/2007/10/13/the-insect-queen-part-1/#comment-1144 Aaarrgghh! I'm going to have to pass on part 2. Herself has about 28 days to go before our first is due. And we were walking in the woods the other day but we had two dogs not one. http://blog.sweetnam.eu/2007/10/10/strolling-about/ I'm gonna have nightmares, I just know it! Aaarrgghh!

I’m going to have to pass on part 2. Herself has about 28 days to go before our first is due. And we were walking in the woods the other day but we had two dogs not one.

http://blog.sweetnam.eu/2007/10/10/strolling-about/

I’m gonna have nightmares, I just know it!

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